The effects was really cleverly made, well done^^

Not to bad!
Your animation and artwork are coming along nicely.

Just keep practicing!
For the future, the inclusions of voice acting will be necessary.
Don't be afraid of rough work, and expanding the inbetweens.
Also work on the line quality and smoothing out the shadows.

You defiantly have a comedic flair in your art and your story telling, work and expand on it!

lol this is awesome, this would be epic if it had a bigger resolution.

i think having no voices is unique, you should continue to do this, these would really stand out from the group.

also longer pls.

moar.