This is amazing, I never seen anything like this. Good job!
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read the other episodes too!
kurumi matsuoka is living alone her father ran away and left a debt one day some one gets inside her apartment and attacking her and then carl black a young detective saves her...
shokomomi responds:
thank you T^T♥♥♥♥♥
This. Was. Amazing! My favorite so far! You did an amazing job!
shokomomi responds:
Thank you T^T♥♥♥♥♥
1 trillion stars out of 5!!!!!! please please please please please write more! Oh & electricdip your a jerk! Cant you see that this is just plain awsome! Cause Dude Your blind if you think other wise!
shokomomi responds:
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥thank-you♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
This was not good. Even though you included that it was a visual novel, it should not be apart of games. I think you should make this into a movie and put it in the movie section, but i even read it and i think it was slow paced and unorgionized.
shokomomi responds:
sorry ill try better next time T^T