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The Chosen One

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Nov 14, 2014 | 12:56 AM EST

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Second Animation ever, tried a more narrated animation talking about a creep story of a joke between me and a couple of friends.

I would appreciate any criticism as i'm aiming to improve some more
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Rated 3 / 5 stars

I love the the really caught my attention. I laughed a little but you should flesh out your plan of execution a lot more. I don't think the story made that much since. The drawings are not bad at all. spend more time on that. Lastly, around the time that the music changed to a "horror scene" the voice audio got really loud...not sure why.

I guess overall, good start..spend more time on the project for better quality...and for planning I would suggest learning how to storyboard. (If you don't already know)
That way you have a general idea of the direction you're trying to take.

PLEASE ADD A PLAY/REPLAY BUTTON TO YOUR PROJECT....ITS NOT THAT HARD. Thats my biggest pet peeve. Thank God for the NG Collapse Button. Anyways I hope this helps a tiny bit.

Datreco responds:

Thank you very much for the critism i shall take all of this in hopes of improving myself in the next animation. :D


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Your animation is getting much better but you should focus much harder on fixing your sound levels. The music is on the same level as your vocals and I can barely hear you, and then when you exclaim the volume is almost unbearable.

Datreco responds:

Thank you, this is my first time working with Sound in flash so still getting used to it but i shall work on it thank you very much :D