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Second Animation ever, tried a more narrated animation talking about a creep story of a joke between me and a couple of friends.
I would appreciate any criticism as i'm aiming to improve some more
I love the soundtrack.at the beginning..it really caught my attention. I laughed a little but you should flesh out your plan of execution a lot more. I don't think the story made that much since. The drawings are not bad at all. spend more time on that. Lastly, around the time that the music changed to a "horror scene" the voice audio got really loud...not sure why.
I guess overall, good start..spend more time on the project for better quality...and for planning I would suggest learning how to storyboard. (If you don't already know)
That way you have a general idea of the direction you're trying to take.
PLEASE ADD A PLAY/REPLAY BUTTON TO YOUR PROJECT....ITS NOT THAT HARD. Thats my biggest pet peeve. Thank God for the NG Collapse Button. Anyways I hope this helps a tiny bit.
Thank you very much for the critism i shall take all of this in hopes of improving myself in the next animation. :D
Your animation is getting much better but you should focus much harder on fixing your sound levels. The music is on the same level as your vocals and I can barely hear you, and then when you exclaim the volume is almost unbearable.
Thank you, this is my first time working with Sound in flash so still getting used to it but i shall work on it thank you very much :D
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