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Train Justice!

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rated 2.90 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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comedy
humor
train
impastoanimation

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Uploaded
Nov 13, 2014 | 3:12 PM EST

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Author Comments

Please see my youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCOp66HoCzZcA1_FCkhDU0Mw/featured

How else do Matt and Tommy act like jerks and receive TRAIN JUSTICE? Write your OWN story and share it on my youtube comments. Or make up your own characters. Better yet, get the files from my youtube comments and make your OWN TRAIN JUSTICE animation. Post the link to my comments on youtube and share it around!

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Reviews


ironhide1ironhide1

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

This looks like it was done in MS paint. I do not like to be rude but I think a bit more effort and polish could have helped here. It was short and funny and that does save you from a terrible score.


AnimatedCritic responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback! It wasn't in Paint; it was in Illustrator, but drawing is not my strength and I know that. So I'm pushing ideas more than drawing and some day looking to hire people who can draw better than I or teach me how to draw better. Definitely not for lack of effort, though! It had to do with speed (producing new material every week) and doing my very best within that constraint. It looks incredibly simple but actually took a good deal of time to produce.

Thanks again!


CyberdevilCyberdevil

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Train justice as in: we need more justice, so we should all train justice?! Yeah! Good morals! :P Animation feels a bit so so, but I like the idea. Looking forward to more!

-cd-


AnimatedCritic responds:

The hope is that it comes across as funny, but perhaps also gets the question of "what is justice?" going in our minds as well. So it looks like I've accomplished at least a little something!

The animation is an issue, in that I'm trained by Pixar / Dreamworks animators through Animation Mentor but wasn't going for my very best work here. It should seem competent at least but it's definitely not amazing.

Also if my drawing were better the animation would also appear stronger, and this happens a lot, where we're tricked by really nice drawing into thinking the animation is better than it is. I have a long way to go in that regard, but at least some of the light I'm after is shining through! So glad to hear that.

Thanks so much for your interest and for your honest critique!


coaliscool42coaliscool42

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I though that was interesting... I liked it.


AnimatedCritic responds:

Cool - thanks!

The bigger goal is not just TRAIN JUSTICE but for this to become a part of growing IMpasto Animation Studios, so feel free to check us out on youtube whenever you're ready.

In the meantime, thanks so much for the encouragement, and also feel free at any time to point out critiques as well. Your honest critiques are super-useful to me!