This looks like it was done in MS paint. I do not like to be rude but I think a bit more effort and polish could have helped here. It was short and funny and that does save you from a terrible score.
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This looks like it was done in MS paint. I do not like to be rude but I think a bit more effort and polish could have helped here. It was short and funny and that does save you from a terrible score.
Thanks so much for the feedback! It wasn't in Paint; it was in Illustrator, but drawing is not my strength and I know that. So I'm pushing ideas more than drawing and some day looking to hire people who can draw better than I or teach me how to draw better. Definitely not for lack of effort, though! It had to do with speed (producing new material every week) and doing my very best within that constraint. It looks incredibly simple but actually took a good deal of time to produce.
Thanks again!
Train justice as in: we need more justice, so we should all train justice?! Yeah! Good morals! :P Animation feels a bit so so, but I like the idea. Looking forward to more!
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The hope is that it comes across as funny, but perhaps also gets the question of "what is justice?" going in our minds as well. So it looks like I've accomplished at least a little something!
The animation is an issue, in that I'm trained by Pixar / Dreamworks animators through Animation Mentor but wasn't going for my very best work here. It should seem competent at least but it's definitely not amazing.
Also if my drawing were better the animation would also appear stronger, and this happens a lot, where we're tricked by really nice drawing into thinking the animation is better than it is. I have a long way to go in that regard, but at least some of the light I'm after is shining through! So glad to hear that.
Thanks so much for your interest and for your honest critique!
I though that was interesting... I liked it.
Cool - thanks!
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In the meantime, thanks so much for the encouragement, and also feel free at any time to point out critiques as well. Your honest critiques are super-useful to me!