I don't understand why you've broken this up into 3 parts. It looks good, and would probably be a neat cartoon if you put them together. In parts, they are just incomplete pieces of animation.
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Nodegama responds:
I had to split it because of equipment problems. (I'm using Pencil)
the deam program is crashing all the time.
I also had no software that was able to put those 3 parts back together.
and you are right. in it current state it realy is incomplete.
It feels like i am a little unprepared. (I only use freeware right now)
Got any tipps, what programs to use? Any advice helps right now.
ok this one has sound
very well done, but way too short.
maybe you could make the next movie a bit longer?
i can see that you have skills in animating, and thats why you get a solid 5-star, but still...
it needs more, in general.
more parts, more scenes, more...stuff.
and it could also use a preloader/play/replay button, to not look like a spammy loop.
that is all.
Nodegama responds:
I am still verry new to animation and thank you for your helpful advice.
The Program I used to create these animations is verry tricky to use (It's Pencil)
I tried to create one animation, but had to cut it into 3 pieces. otherwise it would crash before it would even trie to convert it.
Afterwords I tried to put those 3 parts back together but I was unabele because of my lack of programs that could read Shockwave Flash Files. -.-
Yea... I am only using freeware right now - crashing all the time -
I will trie to look into the start button thingy next time thou. Because You are right, The infinite loop is not realy the best. ( I yust did not know, how to ged rid of it )
why's it in 3 parts?
Nodegama responds:
My current equipment is unable to create a flash that is longer than 20 sec.
- i am using "Pencil"
it's a pain -.-
Great animation skills, if only you had better tools at your disposal... never stop.