Its not bad, but i see you have 2 already out. Why wouldn't you just have combined to get a fluent story? without sounds and looking so sketchy... It would be easier to judge if we see it as a whole.
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Nodegama responds:
sadly I was not able to put those 3 parts together jet. (I am working on it)
also the program i use is not realy helping me to acheve my goals. (I am using Pencel)
Got any tipps what programs to use?
I only use freeware right now
needs sound.
good work, i liked her face expressions, and how her pupils dilated when she woke up, (great detail...!)
and i also liked how her body movement was so accurate and spot-on.
but still, i must repeat myself:
-add a preloader/play/replay button, because loops are not a very well-recieved thing in flash movies...
and
-add more scenes in your movie. in general, make a bigger movie.
good stuff tho. many skills in here!
ok on the animation, but what's the story?