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Immortals Part 2

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The adrenalin coated, mayhem sprinkled series explodes back to life with Immortals part 2

The white screen is the end of the movie

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hey man, it white screened..

Little-Red-Bear responds:


good work, and decent fighting scenes, but mate:

-add a preloader/play/replay button!
when the movie ends in a white background, it seems like a bad movie (and your movie is NOT a bad movie...)

-add more scenes
this was too short. 10 seconds?
you could add some more fighting scenes of scorpion VS liu kang, and have a few more fights with other enemies, until the appearance of pinball...

in short, this movie/series needs more fights, more length, and some story going on to reach the needed climax.

try these options listed above and your movie will be much better.
you can do it. you are good with the sprites, so organisethe movie a bit....

Little-Red-Bear responds:

Thanks for the review, youre right instead of the blank screen it should have said the end, i appreciate the advice friend

Nope. Its not at all enjoyable sitting there with a white screen for over a minute. Try filling it with anything at all to look at other than a white screen.

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