You just need more practice improving your art style

I've seen something like this on youtube, but it was better than this. work on your artwork and animation

Hi there,

In my opinion (which is subjective) I feel like neither the animation nor the story is well done. A good animation with not so good story can be ok and vice versa.. but here the animation seems a bit lousy and the story.. I don't really get it (even though I do like the concept of randomness like asdf movie for example), I think it is too random to the point that there is no sense, not even a humerous one.

But hey, that's only my opinion! :)