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Sep 20, 2014 | 7:08 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place September 21, 2014

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Ly tries to get a sandwich when he meets a red weirdo.

This is the first project that kinda stressed me out, i had some technical difficulties toward the end of editing some stuff and just now fixed it, which will explain some of the glitchy looking scenes, but just let it slide this once haha.
Tell me what you think and check out my other videos! Aaand yea, have a good day. :)

Oh, and p.s. i changed the ambient of the video, maybe it will sound a bit better. -9/27/14




Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Strange path in a strange place! Voice acting feels a bit tame considering the savage scenario, but overall it was a captivating otherwordly oddity. That blood reminds me of LiveCorpse btw, same style he used to use. Keep it going!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

The voice acting was kinda off at points (particularly grunts), but that animation wasn't half bad. What made it for me, though...that ending was beautiful. :')


Rated 4 / 5 stars

This was just wonderfully, wierd, the animation was a tad choppy, but I think that only lent to the charm. My only problem is the voice acting, it's kinda wooden, and the screams and grunts of pains are just kinda whispers.

CosmicArt responds:

yea -.- sorry about that. this is probably going to be a rough patch of my animations for a little bit but i hope it gets better with time. thanks for the comment and the follow, your the first. yeeeeey (that yey was mono toned, like my voicing haha....for now)


Rated 4 / 5 stars

This was interesting.

CosmicArt responds:

we are all interesting.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

The animation needs some polishing. I'm grateful that every time I thought you were going to end the story with a simpler little gag you pushed it forward; that made the time worth it.

The acting seems to need more emotion, it sounded like when someone is trying to repeat something she or he heard or imagined rather than something that is happening in that moment. Perhaps when recording the actor tried not to be to loud because of the equipment placement or because of shyness. In any case, I wish you get past it.

Keep up the good work.

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CosmicArt responds:

thanks for your honest comment, yea, i know i still got to work on a lot of things but im actually really happy the people here on newgrounds are pretty nice and very down to earth. Im new here and im starting to get why so many animators i watch on youtube talk so highly of this site.
As for the voice acting, both your statements are correct. I record in my little dorm room which has an echo if you talk loud enough, and im still new to "voice acting" thing (if you want to say what i did was voice acting haha) so in some parts i actually change the script a bit so im not voicing a scene waay out of my capabilities (like emotional stuff), but yea i hope to get better too. oh and thanks again for the comment, more stuff coming real soon :)