Not terrible animation, but there's no sound. Judging by the content, I don't think this was an accident.
Putting some kind of background noise would have helped this. Even if it was just some classical piano music. (hey, it worked in the 20's, right?)
Overall, I don't think it was terrible. Neat concept, but it did fall a bit shorter than it could have, considering the potential.
Thanks vannila-guerilla, I did this in a day, including character designs and so I felt pretty proud of myself, unfortunately until today I've had very little connection to other animators so even moving a symbol across the stage was making me feel pretty handy. I'm also crap at sound. I just discovered audacity, so hopefully that changes quickly.