Flash work is time consuming, but we all want to have something to show off. The best work comes from days of planning and weeks of work and editing. This is just one drawing with a few hours worth of frame work, but at least you're working on something.

It's a cute animation with nice music, but unfortunately after 12 seconds it's just dead space :( I'd have like to seen a bit more animation to fill the space at the end. Beware of the text going off screen too, i'm pretty sure it was supposed to say "Let God in" but i only saw "Let God". Well done on starting animations as i know it's hard to do when you're learning, keep practising and i look forward to what you show in the future. Please don't be disheartened by negative comments as some people are just plain rude and will say anything to make someone feel bad. That is a reflection of them, not you. Keep learning, perhaps message some animators on here to give you help and tips on how to improve your skills. There are some really nice people on here, you just have to look for them :)
Well done.
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