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Telekinesis Cat

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This is a possible title opening I came up with in a few hours. its in need of some suggestions on how to make it stand out more. I'm new to animation but hope to make some animations for newgrounds in the future.

feedback on what you do and don't like about it would be much appreciated.

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Not bad for a few hours! The title drew me in, and the intro is simple but effective. Good Job!

The idea of an opening screen is that you submit it IN FRONT OF A MOVIE, not on its own. Nobody wants to see your three seconds of whatever that was supposed to be.

The only thing I can comment on is the cat wearing glasses. Artwork for the cat is fine, the glasses just doesn't fit right for one and two maybe have the cat swallow the fish instead of drop it. Everything else is fine.

great work, despite the short size.

its fine for an opener. more than fine. but this shouldnt be considered a flash movie. Its only 15 seconds.

but once again it makes for a lovely opener

Credits & Info

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1,743
Votes
9
Score
2.99 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 22, 2014
6:24 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental