The models of your characters can use some detail and a little more love into the whole development of your next cartoon. The story of your next cartoon should also be more of a attention grabber than this particular cartoon skit.

Overall, if you practice a little bit more and use popular skits as an inspiration, you are good to go!

Great effort after all :D

your sound cuts out half way in when you zoom in on the blue guy. more story line, and the audio was to muffled at the end when the character was crammed into the mail box.