Clearly you've a mind for animation. Continue your practice so that you get good enough that no one has anything to say that detracts. Perhaps you should consider your source material? Your pal getting gutted by big bird could be pretty damned funny, but somehow, this 'toon wasn't all that funny.
Keep at it!
The poo at the end was a moist finish
Its ok, just with a bit better animation, it would be great!
Welcome back, again : )