ok, seems promising, but needs ALOT of work.
dude. you have 2 characters that are not the average madness characters, and THIS is good.
this is great!
this animation has 2 guys, the dude with the blonde hair (dont know his name) and jeff (the guy with the sunglasses, right?!)
the story seems also quite interesting, since jeff is shot at the start of the movie, and this is where you introduce him, obviously showing to us that this is just teh beggining of his adventures.
but sadly the framerate is too choppy, and the letters dont stay in there for long enough to see them.
maybe you should let the letters on for some more seconds, or you could also add them in a speech bubble.
ALSO: this movie needs a plreloader, a play/replay button, and a longer movie in general.
this movie lasted for 2 seconds, and it loops.
that is bad for a first animation.
dont get me wrong, you've got something good in here, but man.
you gotta dd more into your movie.
show jeff's story, or his origins, how he ended up in this spot with blond guy, and how and why he got shot there.
i feel that this could be fun and original, if only you add some more stuff in the story and in humour, and if you also take into account all those things that i've said.
take care