I remember reading this as a comic strip. It's the fact that none of this is original, and I can tell that when you showed the face-man, it was a rough copy of the same guy in the comic.
BUT, at least you attempted to make something, and was able to connect the animation with sounds.
its got potential but it just didn't cover it for me. I admit, im spoiled by some amazing artists on newgrounds, but you could be one of them too one day if you keep trying.
I get the punchline but don't think it was executed very well. The humor just wasn't there for me. The movement was very dodgy and didn't flow well. The audio was awful, get a better microphone! The backgrounds were alright and were well designed. However when their was a close up on the guy's face the background was one boring solid color. Keep at it.
the audio was a coverting error from the program and the blured background its because i made the back really fast and it look ugly, any way i made it all by myself, but thanks for your review