Nice work dude, I can definitely see a hint of Adventure Time animation style in there.

As you said the sound is a bit poop, but good poop :)

Keep it in mind when you do the next one :D

Alright, first of all, gotta say, it's an overall decent animation, so thumbs up for you.
I liked the animation overall and I feel there can be some real potential in the characters, so I can't wait for the second episode.
Now if I had to go to the bad stuff I didn't like about it, the problem I had was probably with the timing and a bit of the voice acting in it. The timing in which you give the jokes and their punchlines doesn't give me enough time to actually understand the joke. And when I do, the little time you gave me to laugh wasn't enough. This also has a lot to do with the voice acting. I applaud you for the voice acting, and all the effort you put into it, but during some bits of it I couldn't really understand one or two words, so the joke was lost to me. Had to watch it a second and third time to get everything, so I'd suggest speaking just a tad more clearly. And give a bit more time between the joke and the punchline, so I can at least acknowledge it.
Other than that, I think you have a lot of real potential. This world reminds me a bit of a futuristic version of the Oddworld games, or well at least the world does. So yeah, will be waiting on the next episode ^_^

Not too bad, definitely keeping going and learning growing, you have tons of potential. The computer mouthing "dafuq" was probably the best part of the whole thing.