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Seeking Peace

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rated 2.97 / 5 stars
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Adventure - Other
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story
interactive

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Jul 22, 2014 | 5:22 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This interactive story is about Richard. Well, what is there to say? Richard is a man who - unlike many others - wants to understand this world a bit more. This story is a heart-felt, pumped up story about a man on his own personal pilgrimage to seek inner peace, not without his own small conflicts along the way.

Reviews


vegaramsesvegaramses

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I like games like this but you have very little influence on the story. You go visit Dabian and instantly your character either complains or complains.



berniebear46berniebear46

Rated 2 / 5 stars

some are seeking peace others have a lot of unfinished business to do.



HeyzuKreestoHeyzuKreesto

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's a nice concept, with a (very) clear message about finding traction in life.

In this single chapter I only had the option of getting to know one of the two friends. Though I did give it a second play through to get to know them both.

In my honest opinion I don't know where you can go with this, so I would just elaborate and expand on this chapter; having Richard be able to interact with other citizens of the city and displaying the same message through the dialogue.

Other than that there were some grammar issues, but, overall, I enjoyed your work!


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brutalexcess responds:

I did identify grammar issues through my second proofing! And thank you for pointing it out, regardless. Also, thank you for your suggestions, and certainly sounds like a good idea! Maybe I will try to add some kind of exploration feature in the city?

-brutalexcess


thedudewiththePS3thedudewiththePS3

Rated 4 / 5 stars

The current state of this game isn't anything special, but I see a lot of potential; you certainly have an ability to write.



DuvdaDuvda

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I liked this, very deep and well constructed.

Maybe offers other s a glimmer of hope, but it did speak to me.

I definitely hope you can write more and expand on this.

Thanks author.