Well..

Trying to figure out what's going on. A man going to some bar and tags along a couple of ladies, sings and has a good ending? Seems alright... if it was done right.

Animation seems pretty lazy, there's was nothing but just a white background with silhouettes everywhere. Voice acting seems a little half-baked. The idea works, but you're going to have put a little more effort into this.

Not too bad... But the audio could use some work

I like this kind of animation style, great job.