Well I woulda work more on that submission if I were you try some basic shading it woulda be cool

I was expecting a funny music video; I was sorely disappointed. Too many uses of "fat and gay," no real substance, shoddy lyricism, and a waste of time. The best description for this submission is "A Submission."

LOL. Very Funny. I don't think you could do much to imporve upon this video.