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i made this a long time ago... sorry
if you want to see more please follow the link:
ok, animation-wise, this was OK, and in drawings, it was OK, but man:
TOO SHORT. and it didnt had any story.
every good movie must have a beginning, a middle part and an end.
this movie had... randomness.
and randomness is usually good, if you add humour to it....
but this was... ummm confusing.
and link again? everyone does that... try a more original approach, create some characters of your own...maybe it will be better.
i know this was an old animation, but i must suggest some stuff so that you can improve.
you have the skills, you only need a good story, and a solid script.
i will improve in the future if you want to check my latest work, please follow me, thanks for your comment
Its kinda got... story? It has some animation, but the audio isn't good and it's overall just pretty meaningless. Sorry but we want higher quality stuff here.
I'm not trying to be mean, I'm trying to help you out here..
But, the animation looks like it has no heart or soul into it, you need to work on it..
Also, don't really post old animations...
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