Yo! Dude, that was great!
You have got great voice and sсenario but you need to fix one stuff.
My recommendation- if you will make better outlines then your animation will reach "Popular Movies".
Enjoy The Animation!
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http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/642163
Also please give me some good constructive critisim and say what I did good in this, thanks!
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Yo! Dude, that was great!
You have got great voice and sсenario but you need to fix one stuff.
My recommendation- if you will make better outlines then your animation will reach "Popular Movies".
<3 to you
The artwork and the backgrounds are very nice, I like your use of gradients here - a lot of people misuse them, though you used them correctly here, and it really adds to the backgrounds. The character designs were also pretty good.
I think some parts of the animation could've been improved if you added some easing to your tweens. Tweens are alright, but I think they look much better if you use easing.
Nice job!
Surprisingly good. This animation made me laugh. I was really not expecting this kind of quality. The voice acting was probably the best part of the whole thing. The animations were a tad crude, but certainly good enough to tell the story.
I must admit, one thing that made me not vote to Blam this clip is because of the music, that bass be kickin at the beginning lol... Not to mention I found the comedy in this piece.
Thanks for the review man, niceeeee feedback!!!!!!!!!!!!