The animation was nice and your voice acting isn't bad. I could see you being used in quite a few roles out there in the animation world. I hope you get out there and I see or rather hear you in some animations to come.
So she was 16 and kill herself because of two guys? By the was speak a little bit loader because without the subtitles people can get easily lost.
Not bad voice acting, other than that, not good
Isn't this from homestuck?