A kind of sad story with a little comedy, nice work I can tell it took alot of time and effort. It is tough when a father or a mother is not in your life when you need it the most.LOL when I was younger I would always complain and get so angry at my parents but when I think about it everything they did was out of their love for me.4 years ago my Mother passed away and now I miss all those annoying things she would do or say to me I would do anything to have that back.But anyway nice work, cant wait to see more:)
Really well done!
It's a great story line that you've set up, and the tease at the end is perfectly timed. I'm really looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Your animation skills are getting a lot better and I think the voice talent did a good job of bringing this script and the characters to life. Music 'aint bad either ;)
Adding to favorites. Keep it up!
Thanks man! This flash was actually a prequel to my entry for the open round of the tournament
MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!
Aw man and it was just getting to the good part~!
Oh it's a prequel to something? Well damn I better check that out. That said I really hope this turns into a really well written series with a great cast backing you up.
Oh, it's a prequel! I actually thought it was the other way around, that life after that 'incident' took a twist for the worst... now that you mention it, it all makes sense though. I think both animation and voice acting work great, though the animation isn't as artsy as it was in the first one, not with as clashing and abstract colors (I miss that a bit). I didn't recognize the dotted texture as comic emulation intent, but it did work well! Backgrounds too. I can't say I really pay attention to background audio, but if I don't notice it, that probably means it's good. White noise and unsuitable silence stands out easily. Nice work! This is almost becoming like a series now... I'm hoping there might be an end to this trilogy, a grand finale where all is made better! (even if that's made outside of NATA). Nice work!
I too really liked the coloring from the space flash. The earth's surface however, wasn't very great in its colors. I covered it up with gradients and I think that saved it. My animation received 65 points last time. Oryozema's was the 2nd best with 148 points I think? In an attempt to bridge the gap, I decided on an actual script, the use of voice actors (to prevent confusion like last time), and a different coloring approach (without changing the actual pallette). Once all of the linework was finished though, I figured each frame would take ages for me to color in photoshop, so I dropped that plan. Luckily so! The way it is now feels like a gradual transition into something new. Hence the credits, which were made to look like the first flash :)