The story is interesting, The voice acting is good, but the sound effects and animation need a little work. I see you took a lot of short cuts when it came to both designing the characters and aimateing them. i suggest a little more work toward them so that you add more quality to the animation in general. I think this could be popular given the time to fix a few things. good luck and hope this did not turn you away form animating. animating take a lot of time and effort, I understand if you feel i am being insensitive toward you, I do not mean to be... mean. just wish to help you out. hope this helped.