It’s somewhat average, but much of it is skewed. First off, the animation was extremely limited. The lip-syncing was really lazy and so was the animation in general. The plot was lame, and there was basically no ending to this, which I find appalling. AT LEAST you did put some f*cking effort, and by “some”, I meant only a bit, since this animation was so lazily made that even I could’ve done better on this if I were you. No offense, but this isn’t really a “masterpiece”. This is just MID.
I’m embarrassed by that. Maybe take some animation lessons the next time you make a video here.

Oh yeah, and let me tell you. Nat23 (formerly nat29) has improved at animating A LOT since you last interacted with him ten years ago. Maybe you have improved too since then. And don’t get mad at me for this review. This is just advice. If you don’t like it, then I don’t f*cking know what is.

IDFK if you’re still active on the internet or whatever, but I sure hope you have improved at animation ever since you made this, ok? ok thanks byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

- mashisastar

To be honest, the animation was a bit off and the joke was slightly humorous. I think the artwork couldn't been drawn with a little more care. The last part at the end was just lazy because anybody could make a person randomly spin around while move their legs. Take it from me, I have no animation program and I still can do it.

I think the textbox could have been a little more appealing. This was also very short and kind of takes the interest off at the end when I don't see the end result. In other words, the story didn't have a ending. It just started off and stopped with a guy moving in circles.

Also you've told me that I should apply more of a show, not tell rule yet, and you don't listen to your own advice because at the end, the purpose is written "Don't steal grapes idiot!" I would have to suggest two things to you for your next submission.

Suggestion 1: You could start taking a class in artwork, design, animation, look up videos, etc.

Suggestion 2: Try to look for something easier that may suit your skills and interest you.

I think you did put a lot of effort into making the movements more fluid and on your comedy, but after the way I was treated here, I've found that you can't focus on certain aspects that appeal to you, it must be everything.

I wish you good-luck for future projects and hope you take my advice on improving. I still liked it a little bit though.

Forget grapes. They want samples.

*inside joke*

What.

What.