No offense here, good work on the animation. But the last slide was waaaay too short. Try a little harder..You might consider a monthly or 6mo list of pet peeves, which is what this is, right?

i think this is getting better, i like your animations.

your story unfolds quickly and its a good thing.

add some short side joke like the toilet part, so the final joke will seem more unexpected and we will not wait for it

the toilet part made me laught

I like your animation!

You should not use those stupid laughs....it's not that funny-_- but the animation is still good:)