I thought this was gonna be some japanese romance witha wolf curse or something. The story is pathetic and useless.
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!- This is the 3rd ep for part 2 -!
kurumi matsuoka is living alone her father ran away and left a debt one day some one gets inside her apartment and attacking her and then carl black a young detective saves her...
shokomomi responds:
well sorry the game is not to your expectations from the plot but that is your problem nothing i can do about that.
thanks for reading
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I love the story line. The art work is not the best of manga but it is not the worst. I mean not many people can turn their artwork into a story and put it on the internet! There is one thing that bugs me though, grammar. Like commas, capitalization, and spelling. I'm not the greatest speller but im not trying to be rude, only to help. OH also, maybe instead of posting short episodes alot, maybe take the time to make it longer, and don't post as often. Your story has such amazing potential and if I already get feels and start shipping two characters, its a winner! :)
shokomomi responds:
mygosh! thanks i will try to improve English is not my mother language so it's a little difficult to me but i will try to improve thank you~♥
Now we are talking about serious business XD
thanks, that is a cool episode, just like the previous one :)
shokomomi responds:
Thank you~♥ next ep is a fight!