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Jun 5, 2014 | 10:54 PM EDT

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Second animation.
I didn't get a chance to do much to improve my art in this one and some experimentation didn't look like I wanted so I kept it stiff looking.

Any tips or critique are welcomed.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

make your dreams real. I will love it. I can hardly wait.

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Rated 2 / 5 stars

Well, it was kind of a funny joke, however the animation was poor. What program did you do this in? The sound quality is also a bit poor, the voice for the punchline was far more loud than the setup of the joke, even considering the person was supposed to be yelling. I'll give you a two just because I chuckled, but I know you're capable of better work.

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sketchysketchist responds:

Yeah thanks. I know I suck, and do not want accept it. I want to get better, because I want to be great and I have some really great ideas I want to bring to life.
I am using a very old version of flash MX, and it's around ten frames per second. And I don't know what to do with the parts of the body that stay still nor do I know how to make the animation not look cheap.
We have a high quality mic, but recorded in areas that weren't recording friendly, so the sound is awful. Though this is just until we find a place that we can record without echoes, outside noises, or anything that'll ruin the quality.
Our voice acting is crap(Especially mine), we are just getting used to it. And we don't try to record until we do our best, we just record a bunch and pick out the least worst. Though in this case, the punchline's tone was really bad and I regretted it from the beginning.
Thanks for the critique. I'll try to make better stuff as I go along, though at the moment I'm just experimenting a lot and hoping for the best.

If you have any more tips or opinions, I'll gladly welcome them with open ears.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well that was a bit creepy. Decent job overall.

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sketchysketchist responds:

Creepy in a good way or low-budget claymation creepy?