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May 31, 2014 | 1:27 PM EDT

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First submission of 2014.. I worked hard on this one.
Our teacher wanted us to make a commercial for a "clock" we design. Well, my design wasn't really original: A clock combined with a compass.
But the film was way more original than others did. I used my years of self-experience of animation and made this. But I had only 2 days to complete it, so yeah.
This is not a frame-by-frame animation, but I can make cool fbf animations too. I have one on my page, check it out if you want. sublanimal is called the start for a reason.
But seirously, I would buy a clock if it had an ad like this :D



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Impressive for an animation that took two days to complete.

I understand this was made under time constraints, though the art is still a bit polished. You seem to already have a decent style, but I think it could be great if you drew with more attention to detail. I think the biggest thing you need to work on here is the coloring. I think this animation would be much better if the colors were more appealing to look at.

The humor and writing was quite good though. Good luck on your future projects.

papapizza responds:

thanks a hell of a lot for writing an actually helpful review... I will, I will listen to this. well, details are the stuff that always annoys me, that is why I tried to make stickfigure animations in the past (but failed hard .n. ) anyways, as i said, thanks for the review.