If there was ever an issue with the ending speed, I think it's legible now. It's almost as if the text lags now and again for you to read; personally, I think it's almost in time to the music. But, I might just be a fast reader. May I suggest that the speed can be controlled by oneself by using arrow keys, or holding down on the mouse?
The music is nice. I also like reading the endings. Perhaps the storyline could be fully expanded; where, when, why this journal exists, or has been found. Or even an animation or picture for each ending.
Author Comments
A very simple game that allows you to choose what your character writes about. There are 81 possible choices with 27 different endings! This was a game I made a while back, my first attempt using Flash to create a game. As a result, it is not perfect and is incredibly simple.
Credit for the music goes to Midi_Thru_Kid whose Sloundcloud is at:
KBee0015 responds:
Thank you for the suggestions! I was thinking about changing the end text to be controllable. After all, not everyone reads at the same pace. I especially like your suggestion to add an image for each ending. That is something I had not thought of, but now will certainly be adding in the future if I find it works well with the game!
Interesting idea, but too short, not very interesting text, and you cant even read it completely before it disappears. The stories are not connected to each other at all.
KBee0015 responds:
Agree, agree, agree. In the process of changing the text. Thank you for the feedback.
first of all the speed of the ending text. i believe that it's just too fast for anyone to read it completely and I also expect something a little bit interesting
KBee0015 responds:
I agree completely. I'm actually in the process of making this game a lot better. Let me know if there is anything else at all that you think needs to be improved and I will add if to the new version.