Hey! Very funny, really! At least made me laugh.
The mouths are a bit off place sometimes, mostly to the end, as observed before.
And the dialogue when the private realizes and tell the commander about the missions is not fitting with the rest of the dialogues, I think.
Other than that, good work! And, hey! No backsies.
no backsies
holy recylcled backrounds batman...
This is something shitty I improved
why do I always feel inclined to state how sorry I am in the description.
anyway I super sick right now so i'm goina go vomit, bye
The timing in this is off, really ruins the punchline, didn't even realised the video ended 'cause the voice actor was going through the script too fast to really sink in. The script itself could've done with some work too imo. Overall it just didn't do it for me.
I have honest to god no damn clue why Jaltoid is sponsporing this mediocre, at best, animation. At least if the animation was dull you could've improved the vocie acting. Just saying this isn't front page material, unless Newgrounds is running out of good animators. ffs, even the story would've made up for the animation and VA. I'll make sure not to submit anything like this when I work on my animations.
visedgrub responds:
dude I was given 20 days to make something. its was made for nata (competition) thats sponsored by jaltoid. I usually spend months on projects.
also "I'll make sure not to submit anything like this when I work on my animations." I wouldn't hold my breath.
0-0 OMFG JALTOID IS SPONSORING EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
Hey, really cool style! Love the colors too. Lip sync seems a bit off at times, but otherwise, looks great!
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