Not bad, reminds me of Forbin: The Colossus Project. Could use music and sound fx, I like the robot cleaning in the background doorway. Text moves at a good pace, slightly fast. Next time try something more ambitious :)

Not completely horrible. I would suggest the timing of the dialog be extended a little. There is too much dialog being bounced back and forth without enough time to read it. Also, sound would be nice.

The text advances too fast to read.