A bit short and not much to do, but it was made up for by the atmosphere, scenery and poetic aspects of it all. I liked the ending.

First off, this isn't a game. There is only one thing to do at a time and doing so requires virtually no thought. So you lose points for putting this project in the wrong section of newgrounds.

As an art piece, it's okay. Not sure what you are trying to say, but that doesn't mean there isn't a good message.

Beautiful. Consistent, subdued yet persistent mood throughout.

Music at the end very good. Wish I knew what the end quote was referring to, was it the use of the H-Bomb during WW2? Not sure how that might fit into the overall story/setting of the game but still nice.

My only complaint would be the spelling mistakes but I didn't take any points off because I imagine english isn't your native tongue. My only other issue would be the length/depth of story but in a way, short and sweet is better for this type of thing and the more in-depth you go with a thing like this the more you have to define it, and it's better left more open to interpretation. Very nice, thank you.

The ending was beautiful.

that ending just what i can't explain it cause i don't understand it thats just wow