Not bad looking forward to see were the story goes would help if we had got to know the characters by the story rather than text bios but other wise good 3.5
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Fight of the Death Angels
Episode 0 - Violence District (Pilot)
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[By far, this is my most advanced submission yet. Not the best in the world, but i sure learnt a lot while making this, and i finally glad i've submitted this...]
Year 2040: Strange entities have been detected among human society. Their powers are strangely high, and they seem to be switching bodies/reincarnating/something as far as humans know...
Year 2054: Humans have destroyed the Aka Shinigami with use of robots. Sadly, complete destruction of those entities is close to impossible, and to make matters worse, it requires a human to actually destroy a Shinigami's physical body to lure it into himself. The containment plan has completely failed...
...And Aka's completely random choice of body led him to a basement dweller that was angry at all humans. Right after Aka took away the basement dweller's body and brutally killed his family, as well as the neighbours, Aoi and Midori decided to stop him. Long story short, if humanity is destroyed, there will be nothing to live off of...
[Yeah, some of it may sound really lame...]
Looking forward for the next one!
Animation seen here does need some work..The plot and detail earn you a nice 3 for now. Not bad as a starter to a series here. But please work on the animation ie making your characters move, for me it is much more entertaining. I do hope to see more of this as time and you progress.
Later
MD13.
AoiShinigami responds:
Well, I do plan to advance further in animation as I continue this project. I agree that many things could be improved, and i hope i can do better work in the future, so thanks for the review.
wow!!
