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A comic movie I attend to make. Now figuring out the software and how I want it to look, which animation level I should add and so on. Everything is very much in the learning process right now.
Just uploaded it here to get response and help, tips and so on. Maybe I should have uploaded it somewhere else on new grounds? Is there any criticism "in the making" page?

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The water mark in the is really annoying, so try to remove that. Try turning down the birds because it very painful to listen to. The audio quality isn't the best but i understand not everyone has a "studio" quality mic.

jcjacobsson responds:

Thanks for the comment. Do you now any good software to convert SWf to mp4 or other video file?

Published projects should be for finished works, but the dumping grounds is for uploads. On the forums there's a couple of places you can post to get feedback or advice on an unfinished project. There's also a review club, but I haven't can luck with them. I recommend reading through some of the animation forum request for feedback and advice to get some ideas before posting your own question.
Also the heart beat worked in the opening, but not the whole video. The eyes opening and zooming in worked with heartbeat. The white lines on trees at the end didn't work.

jcjacobsson responds:

Thanks, I'm totally new here and did't know were to start uploading. My attention is to make the heartbeat follow the emotion of the boy but I've not got there yet.
The white lines, did you mean the light from the lamp?

i kidna like the art style but it needs to be finished so i can't really score it high

jcjacobsson responds:

I uploaded this to get critic, but did it on the wrong place.

The art is quite good, but that watermark in the center bothers me.

jcjacobsson responds:

Thanks. Do you now any good software to convert swf to mp4 or other video format?

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Apr 5, 2014
4:26 PM EDT
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