The only thing that i can really complain about is the line work. Other than that the Animation was very nice. Just try and Get your point across more clearly.
This is my first animation. Just trying to get into the swing of things.
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The only thing that i can really complain about is the line work. Other than that the Animation was very nice. Just try and Get your point across more clearly.
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I get the concept, and it is a cute enough video, but I have to admit it took me a couple watches to really understand what was going on. The idea is fine, but it is pretty thin and could do with some embellishment and clearer execution. I quite liked the animation for the most part, a bit sloppy, but some obvious talent there. Unfortunately, I think it goes without saying that the music was truly hideous. It grated and sounded carelessly edited and there's no need for something so simple to drag down your video. There's plenty of great creative commons music out there that could've been used in lieu of it.
Good luck to you in your future work.
Thanks for the tips. I will keep those in mind, so i may bring better videos :)
I like the idea, but the animation is a bit hiccupy and the music is simply annoying. However, under that layer of ugly I can see a good deal of technical skill, so keep on animating! I expect from really good things from you in the future!
Thank you for the helpful tip. I will use this to improve in my next animation