I think this video was a lot better than a lot of stuff on here. I was entertained handy enough and I got some chuckles. It had more than one idea, it had some characters, it wasn't just a bunch of pop references, it wasn't boring, and it didn't over-egg every gag. It skipped from the next bit to the next bit and it wasn't jarring at all, you kind of just went with it. So kudos.
I think it could've been really good if it was just tightened up a bit, some of the jokes were a little mistimed, and one or two of them would've been better if they'd been done in a more throwaway style. The characters could've been a tad more developed. But I look forward to seeing more stuff from you because you have some ideas, a style and a bit of originality.