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Unconfidential: Pilot

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I made this years ago, but have decided to continue on with the series as of recent.


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well, this was not original at all, try to find your own style, although this one was not bad!!!

Try in the future to find your own animation style this wasnt bad but it also wasnt original keep up the good work though

Not so bad, the jokes are good and the animation seems decent even though you said you made this years ago.
You could try to move away from the South Park style, it just looks like a rip-off of South Park because of the way they move and the type of jokes they do. Try to create your own style or do one that you're comfortable with.

closerclover responds:

Yeah, South Park has been a huge influence in the frame by frame way I did this. It was more a choice of small subtleties in such a basic style of animation that I enjoy most. I have come to the same conclusion you have since I made this, and I appreciate the honesty.

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Votes
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Score
4.15 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 16, 2014
4:15 AM EDT