I like the concept, but there is a lot to be desired in this.

the animation so far is very limited and so as far as movement goes I can't score it very high.

However your sound quality was fantastic, the voices sound like they were recorded in an open room though rather than a sound room so that may be something to consider.

The colors are mostly primaries and secondaries, which isn't bad but its too simple. I suggest reading James Gurney's book "Color and Light".

as far as writing goes I think this was strong, just tweaking either the dialogue or having the voice actors put a little more feeling into their lines.

anyway it was nice to watch but needs some more work, I'll be looking forward to your progress on your next piece :).