when i seen that animation i thought i'm gonna wee my self
that was so fucking funny
I can't explain why, but I like this kind of animation. I just really like how they're drawn and animated. Perhaps it reminds me of good old Beavis and Butthead cartoon show, especially with the guitar background music. The voice overs are ok, but they could have sounded better. I quickly noticed the accent, especially with how the Pokemon are pronounced, but that didn't bother me much, either.
About that background music, it's like trying to replicate Pokemon battle theme song, but failing and starting to sound like a different song. Same goes for the humming. In my opinion for parodies it's best to try to replicate the original material as much as possible unless it interferes with the joke and the song is where you missed it. That threw me off a bit from believing this was a parody for Pokemon. I still got the joke and it was an entertaining animated short that I find myself watching over and over a few times. It has its flaws, but I still like it.
Animator- Thank you for the constructiv critisism!
Sound/writer- I appreciate that you took the time to write such a long note so we can improve ourself more. But about the music, me and the animator where afraid of breaking copyright laws and had a hard time working with what music we should make and make it sound like it came from or where similar to pokemon. Therefore i tried to experiment as much as i could with the background music to make it different and be a bit more creative even do i didn´t get much thought over it all, And at the time i recently began to make music but i get your point :) For the voices its just the two of us, we dont have the best accent´s that we are sure of, but speaking a pure english/american accent can be a bit difficult when we are not from any of those countries. (i know other people from other countries speak floating english but we are slightly retarded) But we are searching for other voice actors at the time since using our own voices might not be the best in the animations. So we have much to learn and much to do, thanks again!
I think the jokes were very good! But I also think that your inbetween humour was veeeeeeeery influenced by Hellbenders. Not that it's bad, it's somewhere to start! Your animation is decent too!
hahahahah very funny keep it up
Funny and exactly as long as it needs to be to get the point across.
Showed my bro this. He found it hilarious.