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Bush Gathering

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rated 1.63 / 5 stars
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Uploaded
Mar 10, 2014 | 6:07 AM EDT

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This animation is about native people from Papua New Guinea going and looking for food in the bush.

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Tyke102Tyke102

Rated 0 / 5 stars

not a very good video.



TastyTeoTastyTeo

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Need work with the movements but still better than my stuff xD



misdreyamisdreya

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Was this for a school project or something? I don't see the point any other way. Also the buttons are strange. It's not a long animation, why would I need to stop it? For that matter the stop button doesn't stop the music. So the music just keeps playing while the animation is stopped. Strange.



AdamantArrozAdamantArroz

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad, but why is this for mature?


matilus responds:

Probably because of some of the nude.


xXxAydanxXxxXxAydanxXx

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Idea: I don't really understand the general purpose of the video, and the plot did not seem to be developed at all. I understand that the people* need to go up the mountain to find food, but it seems that most of the food is not on the mountains at all. The animals are gathered by what seems to be a watering hole, which are normally located on the Savannah, and the people were gathering coconuts, which are found in coastal regions, not on mountains.

Art: I am not certain whether this is a rough sketch or a final product, but I do have a few tips either way. This seems to be made in paint, and if so, I think you could benefit from getting a sketch tablet for your computer. I realise it is rather difficult to draw anything in paint to begin with, let alone if you are trying to draw people with a mouse or track pad. My other suggestion for the art is that if you can't invest in PhotoshopCS, you could benefit in getting the free programme GIMP for adding shading or textures.

Animation: It's rather choppy, so I suggest at least doubling the FPS of the video. The setting sun, however, ended up having a relatively smooth animation to it; but still needs work. Give your characters a bit more life, as opposed to keeping it "one leg up - one leg down".

General: It's great that you're taking the steps to put content onto NewGrounds, but your work just needs a little more effort. I'm not trying to be mean at all, I honestly just think your product could be better with time. Have a great day, and good luck on your next effort!

-xXxAydanxXx


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matilus responds:

Thanks for the feedback .