It's a good concept in a very dull and boring way. but still kinda nice.
1. You need to make better artwork.
2. You need to find a better soundtrack than this one.
3. This game needs to be faster.
4. If all other steps ar complete, make the game for android and ios.
Thanks for the feedback, we'll take note of it!
Screen is too big. Camera should not keep moving when player stopped moving the cursor. And it's pretty hard to read when the text is moving across the screen at accelerating speed.