I honestly have to wonder how this passed judgement. I agree entirely with both Jackofpojo and patwotrik, this game is much too unfinished to even give useful feedback. There doesn't seem to be anything to do in the current version other than to spin the world (which looks bad because the world does not extend outside of the play area and because you fall outside of the play area) and die (which isn't obvious that is what is happening because the 'trap' barely looks like a trap and you seem to more bounce off of it than anything). There is no goal, no gameplay, no resolution, no end. This is much too empty to give you any constructive criticism other than that you need to have it be more complete before anyone can really give you constructive criticism.
Now, from reading your author statement it sounds like you already have an idea of what needs to be in the game you just haven't added it yet. Indeed you write the author comments almost as though the game were practically finished. Turn word is not a game right now. It is a mildly interactive animation.
Now, I'm not saying that you should quit or that you are stupid or anything negative like that. But you should submit more finished work, and there is a proper forum for beta testing (and this is very pre-beta). Something like this it isn't where it should be and you know that it isn't. Take pride in what you do, follow through with your idea which actually doesn't suck, and then re-submit.