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Jan 30, 2014 | 10:17 PM EST

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When a boy gets chased off a cliff by a 18 wheeler, he lands in the ocean being rescued by a secret organization by the name of GMS. The boy finds out their plan, and joins up with a robot to take them down.

Im looking for critique for my videos so I can make better ones in the future, so please lay it on me good or bad I want to know. Thank you!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

These are good graphics and animations you can put in a professional portfolio, simple and clean. However if you want to go for a professional project, you may let the gay-thing behind xD


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Now this is what NG is about.
Off the wall and out of the box experimental projects that defy the norm, not to mention quirky humor XD
This is indeed an ambitious story and animation.
I really like the audio tracks you used in this. Really cool futuristic and funky stuff.
Are these original tracks??
I also dig the way your characters look. Some of the colors are interesting too.
Yes, some of the animation and backgrounds could use some work, but that will improve in time I'm sure because there's definite potential here.
Anyway, keep up the awesome work.
I look forward to seeing more!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I knew it. It's all a conspiracy to kill of the human race. Less and less reproction till nothing. but srly, but seks never made no bebes.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Animation was good but the band in the background seemed a little harder to see than it should've been. Your storyline had big gaps such as why he was run off the road in the first place. Where the tech had come from. Why the one robot was helping him.

jaschieffer responds:

lol its suposed to be a mystery and the band was from an older movie that I just put in for extra detail.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

So, your issues don't really come about in the form of animation, it's your connection between the storyline and said animation. Many things could have taken a lot less time than they did, such as the walking scenes. Those transitions between the actual events in the story made the video boring to watch at points. It was obviously labored over, and the voices were very good. Personally, I think the story was slightly distasteful and the fact that the hands were always open while walking slightly bothering, but you are very far from the most distasteful artist on NG and the hands aren't that big of a deal.