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Pale Sunday - TwiggySstar

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That was a pleasant surprise of an animation. Keep at it.

saulogoki responds:

Thank you!
I'll do my best!

The general style is nice, and what needs to be improved is general quality (Which we all knows is just practice XD).
All in all though, I liked it!

saulogoki responds:

Thanks a lot!
I promisse i'll try to make the next one better! :)

Try to add detail to backgrounds next time, work on lines, since they need to be cleaner to fit your style of drawing and details in general as Cyber said :)

saulogoki responds:

Thanks for the tips, Kuhki!
I'll work on that!

Strumming on a guitar without strings? :P Feels like some parts could've had more detail, but it was a good video, a happy song accompanied by a pretty happy video, all kinds of cozy characters clapping in tune, instrumental variation, the scene moving from mirrors ro real audience. Super song!

-cd-

saulogoki responds:

I'll try to improve some aspects on the next creation!
Thanks a lot! :)

Credits & Info

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Faves:
15
Votes
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Score
4.55 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 29, 2014
9:16 AM EST
Genre
Music Video
  • Daily 5th Place January 30, 2014