Without audio, I have no idea whats happening in this animation. There are no any texts either.

I understand this is your first animation, but check what's up with your audio. It was absent when I viewed it, and I checked my speakers before writing this review to make sure that it wasn't just me. I honestly don't care whether or not Newgrounds blams this, but try re-uploading this after troubleshooting and fixing the audio so that it doesn't get just 1 star next time. (I can't really say anything more about the content because the movie without audio is non-sensible).

I don't think that an Animation without sound (AND without really impressive artwork) do the trick. You can't follow the plot (and it seems like it wouldn't be that much of a plot, too). But the animation itself seems to be okay, definetly better than some other stuff you can find on the internet. Reupload with sound and I'm sure it get trough the judgment. Just keep working on your skills. Actually I'm sure I would have at least chuckled in the end. So again I say: reupload with sound or at least subtitles.

There seems to be no audio, which is something you'll need to fix. For your first animation, it's pretty good.

I could have passed this if the sound had worked. The animation isn't the best but Ive passed worse.