This game is genius! The story sucks you in right away keeping you eager to move through the intriguing storyline as fast as you can to see what happens next. 2 thumbs up

On the technical side, there were a few times I didn't have enough gold for something but the game let me get it anyway, resulting in negative gold.
Still, as a text adventure goes this was really fun, and I would definitely pick it up and play it again. I didn't get too far my first few goes, but It's enjoyable enough to make me want to go back. The interface took a little bit of getting used to but once I worked my way around it I was fine.
If you don't like text adventures, this isn't for you, however. There's not really a way around that, but if you like the genre it's pretty great.

This is a very basic game. Improve the graphics, add sound, and content.

It's too simple.
It could have used a little effort on the art by using a background image and a more stylized user interface.
Music could have been easily added; there are a lot of loop-friendly bgm available on newgrounds alone.