Manface Baby eating

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I understand this movie is "Crap" but I seriously appreciate constructive criticism and value it no matter how harsh it is, so you may want to tell me what you think, after all I aim to improve. Appreciated the time you spent to watch this, ladies and gentlemen.

So here's my "Full Length" movie, enjoy! and don't forget the popcorn!

Made in flash CS3


A baby that manly doesn't care what he eats! For as short as it was I tought it was pretty good. Can't way to see what more you got!

This wasn't really funny for me but the animation is decent and the only things i think you could improve on is having some colour, maybe? Or just try to animate the flies flying around the spoon a bit better, it looks sloopy in that part. But the rest is good.

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Here's some constructive criticism. Come up with a plot. The baby is approached with nasty food, and then he eats it, does any of that give you the idea of a compelling story line, or even peak interest as something you would want to watch? Your animation was decent, storyline blew it, add some length.

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CaptainRazer responds:

I see, well I made this animation as a concept (and practice for flash) in the first place, but will put the plot in my top priorities the next time I make an animation. Thank you!

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2.17 / 5.00

Jan 21, 2014
1:50 AM EST
Comedy - Original